Epic Win!!!
Wow, I never seen a human and a cat turn into a robot before.
Epic Win!!!
Wow, I never seen a human and a cat turn into a robot before.
And now you have
your life is complete
LOL....
So you attracted a mob of spammers. Man, it must be really annoying as hell to get one of those things spamming you. I even saw some reviews acknowledging your 14. Poor bastards...
Well back to your pic, yeah it's turning out pretty good. The only problem I see is the arrangement of your panels, maybe you should work on that. It's kind of confusing, I can't keep track of the events happening, eventhough I viewed all 8 pages.
The drawings are good anyways. Keep it up.
... its only one no life doing it...
anyways, thanks~
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hmm...
idk how to fix that....
thanks~ XD
Greatest Thing Ever!
Where have you been? It's been a while since a gazed into your awesome pieces of work. Yeah awesome as always. The thing that I like about your art is there is always a story or description to go with it. My absolute favorite. XD
haha hooray!
thanks so much for the high scores and kind words always nice of you to drop by fifty-50. thanks for favin' this guy! he's becoming one of my favorite guys to draw recently.
*highfives*
Good, very good.
This is a good one. You've definitely improved, especially the anatomical parts of the body. I'm really glad. But there are still things you need to work on:
1. The muscles are still a bit off, especially the knee, she looks like she's double jointed or something. But your almost there!
2. The folds on the clothes, needs more work. Learn the behavior of a piece of clothing when put in these things. This should be easy.
3. The shading, it looks like your shading doesn't make sense on the clothes.The shading on the skin is pretty okay, just do the shading on the clothes like the way you did with the skin. For your light source is in the back of the character right? There should be a region where the shadings should be
Here's a 10 so your score will go up, so the reviews of those dumb faggots are countered with this 10. Even though it will have just a little effect.
Thanks fo' dee awesome review!! yeah before I didn't know much on folds on actually today at school I was reseaching how to do folds and I understand it better now. Yeah about teh muscles...I still need to work on it a little more I only did like 10 sketches so far...so I'll do 20 more and then I should have it down. I definitly Like you're reviews because they help me instead of those reviews that just says its great. Recently I've been trying really hard to get better and it's nice to know I'm getting there...slowly but surely
Epic.
This is the most epic pic you made. Nice job! I really like that shading, it is one of those things that define your style. The anime also looks good. I just love it. 5/5
awesome! i'm glad that you think its epic and stuff! :))))
This sure is a good one...
Yo Jak! I haven't seen your art in a while, and I might say this one is pretty good. Your use of colors are very good, the blue blends in nicely. And the "fish spirit" is it? Is a very nice touch. Yup, keep making more...
Thanks dude.
Haha!
I really laughed when I read the review saying you were a man. XD Well back to your art, yeah I really like your style especially the pose! It's really cute. :3 You didn't need to add a background ya know, the background is gonna be blocked by the aura you chose anyway. Nice pic!
Oh, the one I sent in doesn't have a background. I put one on here so it wasn't empty.
Wow!
Up to your usual stuff I see. I like it!
Thanks Dude :D
Great!
Nice touch with the black and white there! I love how you shade your work. But I have one little piece of advice, the black dots in the background seem to mess with the picture. As for the concept, I love that puppet master controlling others. *Cough* *Cough* What is she getting forced to do anyway? *Cough* *Cough*.
she's forced to do what ever i want her to do :3
Too messy I might say...
The lines is very messy to look at. You should have used a pen to clean up your lines. I can still see the pencil markings. It would be more effecive if you learned to edit your art in photoshop. Other than that, it looks good. Maybe.
ty for the criticism :) ill keep that in mind
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University of the Philippines
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Joined on 9/5/09